Comments on: Impromtu Business Card Design

By: Bob Diamond

Bob Diamond — Sun, 15 May 2011 14:18:44 +0000

I like the overall design. Great concept.

The first thing that came to my mind though is that the transition phase is towards retirement and not a land-based job.

By: Steve Simba

Steve Simba — Sat, 07 May 2011 07:14:54 +0000

Regrettfully in this digital age that less people now seem to be carrying business cards. It used to be a real delight to receive a thoughtfully designed business card. Some were like works of art!

Steve Simba
Ststems Analyst
Uk-Med

By: JJ

JJ — Sat, 30 Apr 2011 03:01:00 +0000

Very nice design. I think “seeking sand” would have been better wording that “in transition”. Hopefully he ends up in better shape than Tom Hanks in Castaway ;)

By: Peg Rack

Peg Rack — Mon, 25 Apr 2011 19:31:41 +0000

You should have had your friend’s father in the chair on the beach in the last transition

By: Jeannie

Jeannie — Wed, 20 Apr 2011 02:53:46 +0000

I really like this card. It tells a story and has a little humor to go with it.

By: Andy

Andy — Fri, 11 Dec 2009 13:39:27 +0000

Thanks for the feedback, Tom. The overlapping on the phone number isn’t my favorite thing either. I have not yet seen the printed version; I hope it is more evident in them that the contact information that falls over the land is darker than the information over just the water (slightly).

By: Tom H

Tom H — Fri, 11 Dec 2009 13:07:59 +0000

Very nice, both concept and execution.

I like the way @gmail.com us used to indicate the email address.

I don’t like the way the home phone number is intersected by the curve… I can’t think of an elegant solution though.